... I was already in the second set of sentence structures, and surprises me incomprehensible words that had me quite frankly at the beginning ruined the joy of reading, because I had a premonition that the other sets may be similarly written.
are also mentioned many minor matters and are usually also
some detail, which I think is not necessary and would not make for a particularly interesting voltage profile.
Actually, you never know really whether something could be important for the rest of the story or not. Overall
should perhaps be written shorter and less complicated, so that the relationship better recognized and less detail in order not to bore the reader.
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